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Lies Within Famlies by ~lonelyicequeen:iconlonelyicequeen:



Nothing I do is good enough for you
I’m a work in progress and all you can think about are the emotions that may have been wounded…..now
What about the scars I’ve been carrying like a shield?
The tough skin that I had to grow to deal
With life…
I’m not turning into something you don’t like
I’m turning into what you wanted to become
Life is solitary journey
And I walk it alone
I live it alone
I alone…
Sob stories only bring out the weakness in others
Making them feel guilty about the life they live
Without regret and answers
To people who are so disconnected that they need a phone to stay in touch
With life
I’m tired of living in your box
And conforming to your ideals
Of whom I should be
Maybe I see this as a test
Maybe you’re interfering with my process
I’m stuck in this cocoon that you’ve wrapped me in
My wings are decaying from over-incubation
I’m cooking inside this hell of a mind
My eyes burn from the light that goes off in my head
Over and over again
I live epiphanies every day, because I fail to see
The lies within families…
©2008-2009 ~lonelyicequeen
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Author's Comments

I can't say this is my best ever, but it's raw and unedited...and I think I intend to keep it that way. Enjoy...

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:iconzen-oracle:
i like this poem, it seems that in the process of writing it you're actually figuring yourself out and the ideas are still so neatly portrayed! wow dude!

fav line and perfect example of what i was talking about "I live epiphanies every day, because I fail to see
The lies within families… " <3
:icontemporay-insanity:
DAMN!... you are wonderful... because you share your pain others are not afraid to share theirs...you inspire me. no it's not your best...it's so much more...how could anyone begin to critique such raw emotions??

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I'm that girl who's smile can light up a room, who can make anyone laugh and feel good about themself
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I'm that girl who when she says she is fine, she wants some one to look her in her eyes and tell her she is lying
:iconse-kaoru:
Geez, I never know what to say when I read your poems.. >.>;
So...um...
FIGHT DA POWA! -shot-

:D

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...Maybe it exploded?
:iconlonelyicequeen:
WOW.... -.- lol!

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You have no right....!

Proud member of =RawEm0tion
Stay positive! *ProjectPositivity
:iconse-kaoru:
What? XD I always wanna say something but it always comes out as "cool" which makes for a lame comment. XD

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...Maybe it exploded?
:iconlonelyicequeen:
LOL....justsay something even if it's "nice"...

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You have no right....!

Proud member of =RawEm0tion
Stay positive! *ProjectPositivity

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